|Reviews for Best Friends|
| RoseAraxie chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I love this so far, but honestly, I skipped over the italicized portion in the beginning because it was before the character descriptions and I skipped over those too. Everything in the character descriptions should be apparent in the telling or "showing" of the story. But I'm already hooked, and except for few phrases that seemed off I can't wait to read the next chapter! This is really good!
| Lizaveta Demarkus chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I have to be honest, the story seems pretty interesting but the use of italics turned me off. There are other ways to emphasize a word without the use of italics and even getting the point of a dream sequence could be brought to light in a different way.
I like the idea of the story however, I have always failed in my attempts with werewolves! . Other than the font, there are just a few grammatical errors but the structure of your sentences are well thought out and give a great image to the reader. I will try to go through this again.