This is incredible and extremely well written I absolutely love it and it makes me so sad because slaves were treated like dogs regardless of how many babies they had. Not to mention a majority of the children born were the slave masters. I sort a wished you would've continued on to see what happened with the baby and her dad but you chose a good spot to stop. Please keep writing cause you are awesome

I liked how you expressed Aisha's feelings, though this whole piece seems a bit short and rushed. I think you should extend the piece. But good job. I hope to see more from you.

Best of Luck,

J.A. Fletcher