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Bddssgsydhdndk chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
i liked this poem. When I read it the image of a boy and girl sitting across from one another popped into my mind. She is waiting for him to tell her he loves her but he is hesitating to do so. Good job. I also liked the way you put the words, waiting, thinking, speak, working on different lines all by themselves. Good word flow.