Reviews for Those Fingerprints Are Mine
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Very wise poem here. I should start applying that to my life.
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Eve Amare chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Fantastic piece. It really made me look back on life, though I honestly have yet to fully understand why. Keep up the great work.

As Always,

Isca chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
"No lie has survived eternity." Thought-provoking.

I also like the idea that it's best not to "photocopy" the future.
OspreyEagle chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Haha, nice
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
A great metaphor, very fluently expressed, all in one sentence! :D
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Excellent job. Keep it Up!
Mirabella chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Nicely done!

I like the past elements in this, and the future/eternity elements too, it seems eternal and has lasted since time began. :)
taeawesomest chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
This was very eloquent and beautiful. The title really caught my eye, and "no lie has survived eternity" was a wonderful line.
SadnessWaterfall chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Wonderful wonderful read!

So very very beautiful! thank you for sharing!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I love the idea of this - the title is great; it really is assertive and aggressive. I think it runs together a bit much to be a true tanka, but I'm guilty of doing the same thing myself, so I can't really talk. :D I loved the "photocopying the past" part. Very creative. Keep writing! :)
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Great construction, "no lie has survived eternity", great line. Good work.
dancingpaws chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
haha very good :)
Melanie Layugan chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Amazing. Short and to the point. Keep on writing!
Punslinger chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I don't know much about the tanka form, but I like this one. Lines like: "Quit photocopying the Past..." offer unique insight.