|Reviews for Steam|
| NadieImportante001 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
losing your virginity in the girls locker room is ridiculously hot. makes my fumbling first time in my ex-girlfriend's bedroom look like recess in kindergarten. one thing though...the word "cunt" makes me really uncomfortable, probably because it has only been used with the most negative, derogatory intent in my presence. you might consider changing to something less...controversial.
| Mahogany Grey chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I really love your work. I love the love/hate relationship with a secretly lust/love mix thrown in. It was a very hot story.
| Zoe Marhassa chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I love this! Why do I love this? Because it's hot and sweet. There's substance here. Hailey and Jade have personalities outside of being the objects of someone's private fantasies. They're characters in and of themselves.
I'm kinda surprised you reviewed The Mansion, though. It's raunchy in comparison to this (I'm contemplating deleting it to save me further shame) and my fic An Unlikely's way more like this.
I can't wait to read more of your stuff.