Reviews for Love is Catching
creating.myself chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Wow, I love this one! Excellent use of rhyme. Excellent formatting/use of parentheses. Neither too short nor too long. To the point. Meaningful. Sweet. Awww. D
Anise Cary chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I really like the form of this poem, and it's very sweet. I love the way the rhyme flows and doesn't feel forced.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I'm impressed with how the rhyming flows, and how it's not forced. I like the parentheses as well.
thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Beautifully written, impeccable rhyming, and I love the last stanza.

SirScott chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Wasn't that last line from a song "I acted my part thinking I was so smart." This was well constructed and entertaining to read.

nickyO chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I love that last line, so well earned by the rest of the poem, it just brings it all together.
qczhao chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
this is nice, a nice bit of humour and warmth, good job.
He Named It Fluffy chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
tiger002 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
That was good. The pattern have the pathrethsies adding to the flow of the poem nicely. Great job!
Isca chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
"Love is Catching." I like your title choice. The word "catching" suggests that love is "contagious."

"I caught her by the eyes." Ah, yes, the power of a lover's gaze; it's much stronger than physical touch sometimes.

"She caught me by the heart." I read "She caught me by the" and subsequently thought of other (more vulgar) words to end the phrase (which made me chuckle), so I like that you ended this line with "heart." :)
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I was hoping you'd do a Valentine fic! And you did not dissapoint! Loved the humour and the lovely ending ]
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Aww D such a vivid image, poor dude. You're great at rhyming!
Mirabella chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Oh i love this one! Especially the ending! It's so well rhymed and styled there, and i love the little additions in brackets, well done! :)
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Unlucky lol

Funny how he thinks he's all player like then falls for her. The thoughts being in brackets is a clever little idea, the rhyming was perfect.

Really enjoyed this one :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Hehe, nice one! Happy Valentine's day! :) Keep writing.

Anna _
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