Reviews for Please Baby
Hali2010 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
wow, what a bit**, first chapter and i already can't wait for them to break up lol, great start though looking forward to the rest.
Just in cases chapter 12 . 5/6/2010
Hey! Tops job on another original story.

Loved your characters and your plot as usual, I just wish that it was a bit longer and that you made the end more complicated, I guess. I feel as though their reunion was to quick and the way Jannie accepted things at the end was too easy.

But I still loved it!

Well done once again. Thanks for a good read.
romanvagabond chapter 12 . 5/4/2010
I really liked this. Jannie was such a pleasantly obnoxious character and very easy to hate. I much preferred Dane and Nicole's story, but this is sweet as well. :D

PS: I can't tell you how much I HATED the name "Princess." (Though there were reasons for it, I cringed.)
jive bunny chapter 12 . 5/2/2010



that's all there is to it really... :D

I look forward to reading more of your work!
Dust Errant chapter 12 . 5/1/2010
Excellent story as always, will be looking forward to whatever you have lined up next!
outsidersgirl chapter 12 . 4/30/2010
tghis is good
Biodragon chapter 12 . 4/30/2010
Sweet ending, so so awesome :D
jigglee chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
i went to your deviantart. nice tracing. HA.
Itachi aprentice chapter 12 . 4/30/2010
Great work. Thank you for writing a wonderful story. Can wait to see what other world you create.
RainAddict chapter 11 . 4/30/2010
dude this story is so sweet! i almost cried when they were apart! i couldnt even read chapter 11 for a couple days until i distanced myself enough to not cry while reading it! i cant wait to read more! D i dont want it to ever end
Itachi aprentice chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Great work.

Your fan

Itachi aprentice.
Layla the fiend chapter 3 . 4/26/2010
I support Gus.
Layla the fiend chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Please please PLEASE let Jayce keep her in the end!
rozlilta chapter 11 . 4/26/2010

I didn't expect that. I didn't thought Gus could go to Jayce's home and kiss her first thing, but it was amazing!

Yeah, I love it!
jive bunny chapter 11 . 4/25/2010
this was absolutely wonderful!

i can't wait for the epilogue to read more amazingness :D
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