Reviews for Please Baby
David T chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
Very nice, it's good to find something different from the usual teen romance.
berndi chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
*sigh* Domestic bliss. So sweet to read about.

You really manage to convey Jayce's slight awkwardness at being so dependent on Gus, through the constant thanking and the cooking and the asking whether things are all right. She reminds me of myself, actually, lol. I just repeatedly thank people when they're doing me a favour, 'cause I feel so awkward.

:D And things get even more domestic, do they? Looking forward to it.
Biodragon chapter 8 . 4/6/2010
That baby is the cutest thing ever :D

And Gus is being more awesome
jive bunny chapter 8 . 4/4/2010
cuteness overload!

i loved this chapter so much

really looking forward to the next chapter :D
RainAddict chapter 7 . 3/31/2010
so cute! D good chapter! someone needs to kick Jannie's ass. . . hope you update soon
jive bunny chapter 7 . 3/29/2010
Hurray :D This chapter made me happy *huggles*

update soon :)
berndi chapter 7 . 3/28/2010
I feel really sorry for Gus. It must be awful to realise that someone you love so much is not a nice person, even more so to realise that it was partly your own doing. So I think that disappointment was conveyed really well.
Biodragon chapter 7 . 3/28/2010
Aww Gus is being awesome :D
beachcruzer chapter 7 . 3/27/2010
I'm so glad to see that Jacye finally has someone on her side. Hopefully she can find another job soon.
Shadowcub chapter 7 . 3/27/2010
Jannie UBER Bitch!
Dust Errant chapter 7 . 3/27/2010
Overall nice chapter _ Still feels like a lot needs to happen in the next few chapters, but I'm sure you'll work it out
RainAddict chapter 6 . 3/23/2010
good update! finally Gus does something right! cant wait to read more!
berndi chapter 6 . 3/22/2010
Dude, I just love Gus. She's the best, seriously.
jive bunny chapter 6 . 3/21/2010
this is getting so good!

update soon :D
Dust Errant chapter 6 . 3/21/2010
Gus is almost unrealistically awesome in this chapter, but I don't really mind :P Good chapter, Look forward to seeing how you wrap this whole thing up
97 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 .. Last Next »