Reviews for Ol' Blue Eyes
XScarletX chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Uh...well. The actual story's not bad, but the way it's written is simply revolting. It's like first person talking in third person which makes your character appear to be a total and complete moron. No joke.
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Loved it! ] Hahaha I can't believe that "Leggy Red Riding Hood" actually did that - I mean it's funny and so kick ass but I'd be pretty pissed if I was on the receiving end - but that was like the highlight of the story, for me at least haha. But anyways, I liked Carson's cockiness and Joey's taking his ego down a few pegs and yeah, basically I just liked this story. Good job on another wonderful fic! D
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