Reviews for The Night Is Lonely |
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![]() ![]() Please update soon I really love this story and I want to know how it ends! |
![]() ![]() Finish finish finish :D great story I like it when there based on high school l |
![]() ![]() Ik you havnt updated in years and may not use the acc anymore but PLEASE UPDATE :D it's a really good story and would be a shame to leave un finished :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this soon? It's so good. You do have a couple of words that doesn't fit and typos but it's nothing big... *sniff* Your A/N...so heartbreaking... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is reallyyyyy good :D i normally avoid wolf or vampire stories but i loved this one! Please continue :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is interesting, hope you would update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Please update soon! I want to see want happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow the end of that chpter was so funny lol poor Lay, she passed out XD but it was really funny. Sonya is a crazy one for bursting into song like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great first chapter and I loved the description and the detail that you put into it. This story has kept my attention since the first sentence. I'm going on to the next chapter now...or when I get the time lol but I wil be keeping up with this story and hope that it delivers :D -the dark ninja NEKO-(from ) ~Darknessfalls-1120 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super, super cute. Love that your wolf-girl is more goofy puppy than slavering knife-toothed killer. And that she can't resist a thrown ball. That's just priceless. Will be watching this for updates. Fabulous so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah. This is great. Stalker movie.. right :) Sonya is getting more and more awesome as this goes on. I wonder how much her friends know about her.. Luck writing! And cheers on your review count going up:) ~ibbit |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the way her two halves speak to eachother in distinctive tones... That's clever. :D And the reaction from Lay at the very end made me chuckle a little. -Beth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is interesting, there's that concept of a sort of single being with two distinct halves that are the same person and in unison... but not. I'm confusing myself, but I really like that. Otherwise, looking at this chapter, it's technically correct, I didn't see typos or spelling mistakes, so kudos on that. And I like Sonya as well, she's not just a bombshell, she has more to seems like an intriguing character. I'd like to see what happens next! -Beth |