I am looking forward to reading more so keep writing. This is going great;)

You are very welcome!

Hey, I liked it so far! But it WAS a bit too fast-paced and I didn't get whether Ace and the guy recognized her... since, she's famous, right? Or maybe I just got confused with the storyline! Anyway, I really think you should continue this coz it has lots of potential! The plot sounds really good... and I totally think it would work... maybe you can start all over if you don't feel like the current draft went as you'd imagined! Or start a little before where it starts now.. which usually works.

One thing that irked me in particular was that the first 2 chapters had practically no dialogue.. and sometimes characters tend to not come alive when they just narrate things w/out showing them.

I loved Sweet Little Lies! And your writing style would totally do justice to this kind of a story! It took me three-ish different stories, plot lines and the like to construct something I'd once imagined with this central character I'd somehow grown attached to despite not being able to get anywhere with the stories she was in. Yet finally when I combined all four plots it turned out as I'd wanted it to be.

Anyway, i'd love to read more of this or anything new from you coz I love your stuff ]

I love Azriel.

and I like the idea of the story but I think they could be moving to fast. and it is confusing...

The idea is really awesome!

and so is the name!

I love it the way it is so far. It's not what you described in the author note, but it's still going places. Don't take it down. Also, the ending line was awesome.

wow one and a half chapters and i'm already hooked update soon

This chapter has me hooked already. I could basically devour any updates (hint, hint, wink, wink)... although the prologue exerpt definitely doesn't make sense yet.

It's really good so far. I don't want something bad to happen...no! But then again, this is a story lol.

Saw one typo: 'it was defiantly they were going to support me'

Update soon.