Not sure if you're still on here - just stumbled across this looking for something else - just wanted to congratulate you - I like stories (and writers) who take chances and dare to write scenes/subjects that aren't very common place. Witnessing somebody doing that in the library probably isn't very likely but anything's possible (especially in the world of FP). I also loved the description of the story "Love at first..." which is certainly an attention grabber - the only reason I opened the story was because I was thinking..."that can't be what the story is about..." :)

Wow this is really good. I don't know why on earth I decided to read it because its not what I would normally read but I really liked it :)

Congrats on writing something so long! Personally I thought the whole thing was just wonderful, and they're so cute together! I really like that you show that she's not a loner and has friends but that she's also not a huge party person. And the way that you show her opinion of Gavin changing is just perfect! _ Part of it may be because Cassie reminds me of me and Gavin reminds me of... someone, but I really, really loved this. Awesome job. 3 (:

That was cute! Loved it!:)

-Kay

Very cute!

ahaha this made me laugh, def adorable. Yay, great characters in this story.

Aww, it was very cute ] Loved it!

Talk about cute :) This was a good read!

That was so sweet! I loved it.

It's very cutee :D

xx

Ali

It moves a little fast, but it is an adorable and well worked little one shot. Love how they met, even if it is a bit gross. I think everyone can relate to that one person they see all the time and the little voice in their head that has them wondering: what if. :) The v-day present was precious.

good story. this is going to be on my favorite's list. haha

i found this story through sunshine in my veins. and i'm very happy that i did. that dialogue is amazing here and very quirky. and the story is so original and funny too, got me grinning on my side of the world.

CUTE!

I love your writing sasha :)

sorry this took forever to review haha, i'm never on my FP account.

anyhow, this is pure awesome sauce!

:D

p.s: any plans on a continuation for this?

Absolutely cute and definitely original:)