|Reviews for The Assassin's Lover|
| Sucka4fiya chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I like it alot but i notice this was made in 2010 nd i was like damn she might be done with itr
| Your little Sister chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
I like that you wrote from a guy's perspective but here's what I noticed:
When he's lookin' in the mirror, he shouldn't think he's beautifull. It seems vain, which doesn't match his character.
Naturally, being a girl, I don't like the ogling, but I suppose it fits his character: lonely scrawney boy with not much of a life... yup!
I love the "tendrel of smoke" thing! :)
Hope that helped, Sis.
Your little sis
| sophiesix chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
The Shadow is awesome. I love how badass she is, and how she pats him on the ass, ha! Derek's dvlping into an interesting character, he has a nice mix of martyr and pathetic momma's boy ;) Looking forward to seeing more!
| nicolemegannn chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
i like it, it sounds interesting so far and i'd like to see where you take it. so update soon! )