Reviews for Presumptions
Vulcan Rider chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Excellent writing. Nice flow. Great characterization.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

kells chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
This is adorable :D

I love how you've let them develop their relationship instead of jumping straight into the whole 'i fell in love with you' thing, if that makes sense. xD It flows naturally.
Hearts of Solitude chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Aw... this is so sweet... Made me so happy! :D
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I love how their relationship develops. It's too bad that Jayden has to be related to that ass.
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x Farii chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
I like this :DD

Though if you had included the reason why Jayden decided not to go to college it might have been better.

But hey, that's just me(:
tamii chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Cute :) I didn't really like her at the beginning when she was acting really snobbish but she changed for the better. I'm glad she went for the better brother! (now, she can rub it in Jasper's face!)

I really liked this story - really cute and interesting story line. I have to admit I did think it was another cliche - girl falls for boyfriend's brother etc, but you made it very original and she didn't even like him at the beginning! It was really funny when she got jealous!

I'm glad it was a happy ending though - I'm a sucker for those :)
AdiGal chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
That was wonderful.

theyStoleMyPenName chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
very well done! sweet and cute and actually believable.

well, except for jasper. seriously, leaving girls in the middle of the road in the middle of the night? asswipe much:))

- che
funnechick chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Really great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! :)
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 1 . 3/10/2010

that was really cute and amazing!
Smurph92 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010

Write like this all the time

I'm going to tell everyone i know about this

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Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Awhh, swet. (:

Okay I need to sleep now. Lol, almost 4 a.m and I have a test I have to study for when I wake.. ugh..

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