UPDATE THIS STORY! i love it!

Great first chapter! Hilarious! Really makes me want to continue reading. I would love to know more about how she deals with her situation.

i loved this story pleaz pleaz pleaz come out with the next chapter pleaz

Hi,

Loved the chapter. I like the fact that Aleta wasn't able to master flight straight away. It seems more plausible and makes the story more entertaining.

It's interesting that you included some gender confusion by the black dragon. In her dreamwalking could Blakcy actually see her? If he could then why was he referring to her as a man?

So is Aleta's abilities to change from human to dragon flexible. I mean is she able to swap from one to the other (when she is able to control her powers) or is she permanently now locked in her dragon form?

Can't wait to see what happens next,

Garneau.

oh good god. he thinks she's a guy! bhahahaha!

Hey,

great chapter.

I like how you mentioned that Oheli realised that Aleta's powers were abnormal. It seems like something that would have occurred and a useful thing to include.

Both Elek and Aleta are amusing characters. Elek is quite worked up about someone else's welfare, while Aleta is worried about her own skin. I can't wait to see what happens when she jumps off the mountain and if she meets any of the poisonous serpents.

Can't wait to read what you have planned,

Garneau.

Love your story hope you update soon!

Oh, Elek and Aleta's banter is very entertaining to read. Another good chapter! Bravo!

I love Totto! And the rats and dwarf, Jill, are an awsome idea.

Ha, I love her thoughts and inner voice. She does seem a little slow thought. But, ah, I am still interested.

I don't know what to say about this chapter except that I love how you think.

I like the last five lines at the end.

OMG, this is so funny. I laughed so hard at the end. I think I like Aleta's character so far. Great first chapter. I am now onto the next chapter.

you know at the start i thought blacky was flirting in his own way, 'cause they both the last him male she female but know it seems that he's just pissed that the humans killed his mate.

haha funny. I like um tanek is his name? yeah, i like him! big dragon dude!