I did enjoy it! Zaiden is the bitch villain in this story too I see. I don't trust Dorrance... If post-Broken Wings story Moonlight taught me anything about your writing, every character has their owns secrets and the story looks very different from the POV of each one. Kessex is just so naieve - even more so than Jakil - and has social problems too. I bet Dorrence wanted to drug fuck him (nobody slips someone a 'mild relaxant' come on) but changed his mind and felt guilty when Kessex admitted to liking him. Then maybe Dorrence got genuine feelings and has them now. Maybe he's also lying cause he's a manipulative mage that wants to fuck him. Maybe Dorrence just likes the power. Who knows, I sure feel bad for naive Kessex thought but it's a harsh world.

Zaiden strikes again someone please shove that mofo off a large cliff or something he's a horrible human being. Shy people are so cute they amuse me endlessly though I was and still am a bit shy though nowhere near this extreme wonder what that says about me o.o

that was pretty good. i forgot it was only one chapter (why i clicked it) and then suffered that unpleasant feeling when you want to continue but can't xD

They are so adorable together!

I spent this entire story being suspicious of Dor. HE'S JUST SO SHIFTY. But I still loved it and I'm glad Kess ended up happy.

Great story, loved it. You are a wonderful writer and deserve many, many reviews. Thank you for sharing your wonderfulness with us all :)

A cute story. Dorrance is a total moron for deciding to drug Kessex in the first place but I'm glad Kess forgave him. It's a pity the story's so short. Kess is adorable and I'd like to see how their relationship develops.

That damn Zaiden again. I wish someone would really teach him a lesson. Jak was too kind to him in Broken Wings.

Anyway, I love these two. Kessex is completely adorable in his shyness and I'm glad that he forgave Dorrance. They're perfect together :)

Loved it.

what does "Si baroA Ki aA ko dh'lamar kh'isi. Si kexafA eh'nir Kur" actually mean?

WOOT! I started reading another fic on this site earlier tonight, and got halfway through the first chapter and felt sick...though to myself "Good gods, lets go find some Katica..." and read this instead. :)

I miss you! Is Magewize out yet? I wants it signed too if you can :D

On the story:

MAIO! *this is my official sound. I realized it a few months ago. It is instinctive, and comes out when I am excited in any way. I have never heard any other creature make this sound. I think it must be a key to discovering my species...*

OK SO, I actually like Zaiden. I'm not sure why, but I feel like there is allot to him and his character could be discovered to have many facets. He is a bastard, but I feel like there is more to it than that.

I love Dorrance. There are a couple things about him that vaguely remind me of one of my chars, so he was sitting in the background the whole time relating, lol. And of course, Kess is adorable.

P.S.

Thanks to you, I spent my entire winter break staying up until 6am every night reading slash. I am torn between chewing you out for ruining any proactive opprotunities I might have had, and hugging you.

:')

So beautiful.. Why are you utterly amazing?

Zaiden makes me want to go write fanfiction about him getting hurt... Badly...

*goes off to buy your books on Amazon*

Great like always :)

That was sensational... and too hot for words! I love Dorrance, his character's fun.

Sweet Lord, you have a Gaia? Stalking. You. Now. Be nice and never enter any of my contests, I'd play favorites... .

And definitely thinking about buying a book or two. Are you publishing Broken Wings too?

I adored how Kess is shy to the point of social awkwardness, that's like the story of my life, so I sympathize. He's got Dorrance all screwed up in the head and the poor boy just wants a lil attention. Nicely employed use of opposites, I'd love to see how Kess mellows out after a few months with him. I suspected foul play once Kess said he felt strange and while I don't fully trust Zaiden, I'm not sure if I believe Dor right off the bat, I mean even if Zaiden did give it to him, he used it on it his own. That poor sexually frustrated soul... tsk tsk tsk

Hope you win!