|Reviews for Defective Heroes|
| static shakedown chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
I like this.
| nickyO chapter 25 . 7/17/2010
| nickyO chapter 23 . 6/8/2010
| nickyO chapter 24 . 5/31/2010
You've done a good job of expressing the high to low of emotions. Being so in love and then hitting an uncomfortable reality.
| nickyO chapter 22 . 5/14/2010
This reminds me of a gift from a lover who one may feel is over attentive. Good work.
| Eternal Skies chapter 4 . 5/8/2010
does that mean you're not real to people?
or people are so fake they're like paper?
loved the haiku though, interesting point of view
| Eternal Skies chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
*shudders* that's scary but still true
how about we dig a hole for two?
sometimes i feel like crawling underground too o_O
| Eternal Skies chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
ya i think i see it. kind of
found this haiku pretty neat even though i didn't completely understand the haiku. is it about white flowers or that's just a metaphor that's applicable to people?
| nickyO chapter 21 . 5/6/2010
Honest and well written/like the heart in this one.
| frugale chapter 21 . 5/4/2010
interesting... an unusually sad!
| nickyO chapter 20 . 5/2/2010
Mariah's pretty lucky to inspire such loving words. :)
| frugale chapter 20 . 5/2/2010
This one evokes all kinds of cute situations/stories in my head. I love you for that :)
| frugale chapter 19 . 5/2/2010
I love your use of the word despondency in this. Fits the title so well, too.
| frugale chapter 18 . 5/2/2010
I don't understand anything, but it's whimsical and beautiful nonetheless!
| frugale chapter 13 . 4/28/2010
Brilliance. There should be a Postapocalyptic category in the genres just for you. This very haiku justifies it!