Reviews for The Vampire's Lament - Bloody Memories |
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Coffee Cups and Candle Jars chapter 2 . 7/24/2010 Neat. I'm kind of hoping for some flashbacks from fifty years ago. XD |
Coffee Cups and Candle Jars chapter 1 . 7/23/2010 Brillant story, can't wait till the vampire comes in. What really got me to read this was your summary. I don't like when everything's gooey, perfect, and romantic. P |
Tigress Noel chapter 17 . 7/21/2010 Ahh, the end. I am surprised, this story turned out better than i thought it would and i had high hopes for it. You did a great job. The next story in line should be4 great as well. |
Hope chapter 17 . 7/21/2010 I loved this story! Will there be more chapters? I liked the length of the chapters, and I like that it's not like a lot vampire stories I find that are overloaded with sex and mushy romancey stuff. |
SerubiApple chapter 17 . 7/21/2010 the end of the beginning... does that mean there's lots more chapters? cuz it kinda seems like an almost ending. lol. 3 update soon please |
Tigress Noel chapter 15 . 7/17/2010 Oo, that was fucked up. How are you going to stop the chapter right there, Lol it was an exciting chapter. I need to read the next one, so hurry up. ;) good job with this chapter though. |
SerubiApple chapter 15 . 7/15/2010 omgomgomgomgomg! O.O please update soon! |
Green Sea Blossom chapter 14 . 7/12/2010 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! This story is really good! |
Amy aka KITTANDBILLYLUVER chapter 14 . 7/6/2010 Oh man! the 14 chapters are over :( I can't wait for more! I love love LOVE this story! I think my favorite character has to be Calypso, although before it was Angie. Callie just seems like a cute little kid to me lol. Great job! |
Tigress Noel chapter 13 . 6/16/2010 this story is fucking awesome! You really need to keep updating this. I don't know how reviews make you feel but i promise if you keep writing this i will review every chapter from now on! This story if so worth it. I think that maybe by changing the summary you might get some more readers! Anyway this story is fucking amazing. I think i've said that about twelve times, but anyway keep on writing. You got something here. |
A.Funeral.For.Edgar chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 Hmm. Good writing. But, no matter what 'spin' or 'take' you put on them, vampires will never be original. So don't bother with pretending they are; rather, except that they are not and move on with the story. And the title is incorrect. It should be "Keys: An Original Vampire Story." Even though I find this title highly oxymoronic. |
SerubiApple chapter 12 . 5/23/2010 omgomgomgomgomg! Ah! i love this story so much! -cries- you left a huge cliffhanger. It's awesome, but I wants to know what happens next DX anyway, awesome chapter and please please please please update soon! |
November chapter 11 . 5/12/2010 Excellent! Had me gripped all the way to the 11th chapter. I very much look forward to the next installment. Had some minor niggles with the lack of... dialect, for lack of a better term. Shouldn't the Irish of the 1930s use some sort of speech? Would Gabriel really pick up Americanisms like "okay" so quickly? Seems that, based on his character, he would resist a bit against picking up on slang. Otherwise, really good pace and I loved the action. Excellent work! |
SerubiApple chapter 11 . 5/7/2010 I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Please update soon! It's so in depth and your writing is great. And I love how long your chapters are 3 Please keep writing! |
Abby chapter 1 . 4/5/2010 Very interesting story! I like it. Looking forward to more chapters and further plot development. |