Reviews for Provenance I: Verlangen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you translated right after you wrote in German in the last chapter but you didn't translate at all in this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! Are you combining providence 2 with this story? Georgia is one of my favorite characters so I was wondering if your rewriting her story too! Looking forward to the next update! |
![]() ![]() Aww married and mated,update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, just when it was getting good. Please update soon :D |
![]() ![]() Ooooo I loved this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! *spoiler* I love how Mari was fighting with Sara, physically and verbally. I couldn't stop laughing when Ashland growled at Gregory to leave his food alone. Classic Alpha Wolf! But oh man! They finally got married! yay! MAted and Married! So happy! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sara is a bitch! Both the literal and the non-literal meaning. |
![]() ![]() haha me again! i re-read the beginning it was soo funny hahaha and i was wondering... i know its been 25chapters so its too much to put in the translations for all of them. but cud u do it just for chapter 24. preeeety please with sugar on top! its the hottest chapter n the translations wud make it even better! 3 take care! |
![]() ![]() omg i cudnt stop laughing! omg juust loved the things she said to sara...omg just killled myself laughing. n the last name thing... omg fuuunnnnyyyy! lmao literally! and i am soo glad u used my suggestion for the translations! really helped keep the story flowing! i really liked that i wasnt confused about what was being said. :) take care! |
![]() ![]() UGH, I wish Ashland would defend her! Shes his mate! He is sooo annoying and I hate sara! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ive been putting off assignments trying to finish your story so please please continue for the sake of my sanity! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thumbs up:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GRRRR Sara is so mean and shallow! Marilein is pretty! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "That bitch was going down"... Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Go Marilein!update soon |