Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
SmashedIce.X chapter 4 . 10/24/2011
This was good, as your writing always is! :)
YasuRan chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
Aesthetically pleasing or not, I still found this hard-hitting and easy to relate to. Time slips away, along with those opportunities you could've taken and you only realize it once it's too late (as implied by the closing stanza). Each time I read this, there's something that stands out.

As you said: 'It's all too scarily close to the truth.' Pretty much sums up my feelings for this piece :). Sometimes, 'thinking far too close to reality' has its benefits.

Lovely work.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I liked that it was clear-cut, yet vague-ish at the same time (well, at the beginning anyway). Nice work.