OMG! Haha, I loved it! You should be totally proud of it! It was awesome! So romantic. Ek! Hehe, great job! I can't wait to read more of your stories!

Peace Love & Smiles- Danielle Nicole(:

I loved it! It was adorable!

i love the long nicknames. LOL.

this is a really good one-shot :)

This was great!

Adorable. I had a feeling they would turn out to be the same person, but aww... So cute. : )

This was amazing! Awesome job!

It was a lovely one-shot. I wish that reality was somewhat like this :P

this was a fun, lighthearted kind of story and i enjoyed it:) strawberry pineapple smoothies sound pretty good right about now!

loved it even though she seemed a little oblivious...lol!

Ri

I love the long nicknames she kept giving him! Haha...

Of course, I knew from the beginning that Nick and Hunter were the same, but what can you do, right? There's only so much mystery you can inject into a one-shot.

'Understand flashed across'; Typo - 'understanding'.

I have to say I didn't notice the lack of 'typical' dialogue tags...which I guess means you did a great job at making the story flow without them.

Happy writing!

- Rebekah

I absolutely loved it! I didn't think it was too face-paced or anything. True, I expected Nick and Hunter to be the same...but I really, really liked it. Especially his long, long, LONG name tags, that's just hilarious. Oh, and my favourite line?

I wanted to jab the pen he stole violently into the dimple that appeared in his left cheek.

Oh, and when Nick first comes to her to return the pen, the dialogue reads

"Hey," he said.

So if that is what you want to remove...there it is! I really like this story, it is extremely well-written and cute. :)

Aw, cute.

Well, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Of course, I knew Nick/Hunter were the same person all along, but I didn't mind it.

Well done on it!