Reviews for Summer Ruptured pt IV
improv chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Chapter system: upload the chapter as a document, as normal. Go onto Edit Story, for whatever story you want to have the next chapter in, and you click on, I think, Content/Chapters. There you can upload your document as the next Chapter and rename them and whatever.

I liked your dream in this one. And your Eden paragraph, which would have been cheesy except you kept repeating “Eden” and developing it, and it worked.

You don’t have to reply to every one of these reviews ) But keep working at this. I haven’t finished a piece of prose since I was like... 13. It would be great to see where this goes.