Welcome back! Glad to see another story by you. This is intriguing, but very sad. Your heart just breaks for him. I'm curious about Sawyer - she could be having first day jitters or...? Looking forward to more!

I actually really love it so far, please keep posting ;D

Well, I'm certainly interested, not to mention excited. Ever since I finished reading "Thoughtless", I've been hoping you'd post this story. I read the summary on your profile and was definitely intrigued, so needless to say I'm pumped for it to be up.

I love angst (I'm not sure if I told you that in my review for "Thoughtless", plus I'm not sure if you remember who I am even if I did. I suggested "Between You and I" if that's the case.) and this story promises to be full of it.

I like the characters so far. Lucas seems like a good guy in a really tough spot, and Sawyer, though we didn't see much of her, peaked my interest to say the least. I love the whole vibe you've got going on, what with the small town, rash judgements, loving mother, and trying-but-coming-very-close-to-failing tough guy.

On a grammatical note. I'm almost positive, and feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, that when someone is being addressed a comma should seperate their name from the rest of the sentence. For instance, it should be "Hi, Lacey." rather than "Hi Lacey." Like I said I'm almost positive (in fact, the more I sit here thinking about it the more I remember some grammar lessons back in sophomore year, which I admittedly should've paid more attention to that confirm I'm right), so I figured I'd let you know. Either way, it really isn't that big a deal.

So, in conclusion (which that teacher sophomore year told me to never use), I'm really looking forward to reading this story. And I have every intention of reviewing every chapter. Although, those reviews probably won't be this long every time. I can't wait for your next update.

Oh, I've been waiting for this ever since I saw the summary on your profile. I am definitely already hooked. I can see why you're in love with the characters. It's only one chapter in, and I'm already pretty attached, lol.

Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! :)

Oh, wow. That whole chapter was amazing. The emotion Lucas expresses is so real and captivating. You just need to post more. You put so much detail in your stories, they're phenomenal.

I read "Thoughtless" and this is already living up to the standard of great writing you have put for yourself. I really cannot wait to read more.

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Amburlyn