|Reviews for The Perfect GPS|
| Liley chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
It was very nice.
| Lifes.Little.Secrets chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
I want you to write my love story!
| xDoubleU chapter 6 . 12/8/2010
LOL. This story is adorable!
There are a few typos around, but all in all a lovely story with two awesome characters.
| EchoedShadows chapter 6 . 12/7/2010
Aw. What an awesomely creepy GPS!
| checkyesdana chapter 6 . 12/7/2010
so so cute and fluffy and made me smile.
ps I love my favorite highway
| MaAgEc chapter 6 . 11/4/2010
LOVE LOVE LOVE. All your stories are so cute. :)
| I Murder on Impulse chapter 6 . 7/21/2010
Aww...that is so sweet, I loved it :D
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
| ithinkyourgay chapter 6 . 3/5/2010
i like the idea of the GPS. it was hilarious
| JZK chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Chomper - nice nickname lol
| LaylaSmiles chapter 6 . 2/27/2010
Aw, this was such a cute story! I loved it!
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 6 . 2/21/2010
Aw this was cute. Loved the ending! ]
| pendragone96 chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
awe! i think it would be really cute if you had an epalog wit ther waddin in it... this wuz so cute an its so goin on my fav list
| Beautiful Destination chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
I adore this story! It was creative, funny, and the ending made me so happy :D Great job!
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
"It made me feel like a five-year-old with a sweet tooth staring into the window of a candy store, penniless."
Martha did try. (Again, reading while writing the review.)
What I like, is how you've used her emotions to explain the scenarios and development rather than rambling on for three years about stuff that is kind of unimportant, though, maybe a little more indepth would do it a bit better. A little bit longer building it all up. Or maybe it wouldnt. This whole story is nice as just a little thing. It's sweet and themed wonderfully. (She's still only halfway through the chapter. Hold on a second...Must finish reading, then I'll finish the review...
"“Fortunately, I have a plan B,” a voice called behind me. I spun around on my heel, my eyes widening at the incredulous sight."
OMFG! THAT WAS SO FREAKING COOL! HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THAT MAN! I LOVE USING CAITALS! DONT DISS!
The whole knowing/ignoring thing reminds me of someone...(coughcoughherselfcoughcough) Yeah, I dont know what the third person refering is about, ae...
"And from the moment I saw her banging her forehead against the steering wheel"
Oh goly, dont we all want some hot guy to say that to us?
YAY! That was a perfect ending.
Martha had such a role! I love it! What a perfect little fairytale where nothing that should have happened happened during the story, but it all ended happily and fluffily.
This would have to be one of the best FP stories I've read in some time. And I read a lot. I mean, it's amazing that such a short little story had all this wound into it. I'm applauding you for this. You should get it published, and you should definately write more.
How long did it take you to write this?
The whole length of your story was the length of my longest chapter, yet, you got so much more into it than I could ever hope to. Just amazing.
The dialog is so realistic, and not even cliche, you've mixed it up so that the characters stayed in character, and the whole plot revolved around that one thing. Stalker Matha.
Keep writing. You have a real talent, hun, USE IT!