Reviews for Paper Boat
printed-peppermint chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I really like all the imagery you used in here, especially the image of the little paper boat and the phrase "folded whispers onto parchment", it sounds just like what it means when you say it out loud! Keep writing,

printed-peppermint

(And thanks a lot for reviewing my poem!)
Moony08 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I love the line "These folded whispers onto parchment"

Thats just beautiful.

Keep writing!

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Thenardier chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Beautifully crafted. Very powerful images created.
RipplingEbbulience chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
A very beautiful piece.

Keep writing.

-Rippling ebullience (Shivani)