Reviews for Sweet
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I love it, and I would like to inform the other reviewer that poems do not have to rhyme, but merely have a poetic rhythem. The author knows the rythem, and therefore, it is a poem.

The words in italic were truly effective, and added a touch of elegance to the poem.

Two thumbs up. :D
Lomesa chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Ooh (shudder) freaky. Well done, I liked it. 'sucking me to death just sounds a little weird, but except for that, it's nice.
GrantKalin chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I'd like to inform you that you are in fact in the POETRY section. Just because you use the enter button a lot to space it out doesn't make it a poem. It's written in story format, and in no way looks like poetry to me. Sorry for being so blunt about it. Love, GrantKalin