This story is awesomely perfekt and I love it to bits!

So earlier on you mention Lost, and now you have a character named Claire who was pregnant?! Next her baby's name will be Aaron, and all the characters will start spouting out "4 8 15 16 23 42" repeatedly. Conspiracy!

Yet another fantastic story that I stayed up WAAAAAY too late to finish. I love, love, loved this!

This was a lovely chapter.

Now I really want to know what the explanation is.
I love her conversation with her sister.

Well, whatever it was I'm assuming was important.

Claire? Please say it's not a girlfriend.

So I assume the person she phoned was him?

I've baby sat babies before and croup has never been an issue and I'm glad because steam would never have occurred to me.

Contentwise, this was entertaining.

Emmanuel really is turning out to be a nice character.

Now we know they're not related, but not why they're called "family". Why? Her friends seem interesting. Emmanuel too.

I like the intro of the date with Emmanuel though. I hope that we see more of him.

Wait. Are they related? Please say no.

This story was absolutely brilliant and if you really did write it all in one shot I'm jealous. Seriously though, how did you do it? I've read two of your stories now - Saving From Monkeys and this one and I'm starting to wonder why you don't go get them published. They're awesome! Loved Elliot and Rox and now Charlie and Max too. Keep writing and PM me the answer to my question - I really do want to know :)

I like this story, I do. I also hate it! It makes me all so ... so angry! stupid Max, and stubborn Charlie! ... By all rights, getting a reader to feel something for your characters and storyline makes you a good writer, so I congratulate you. I'll be regretably finishing this at a later time... seriously this has me so riled up! xD weird. but... really though i like your story, i just wish no one had to fight sometimes. This is not a peaceful story...