Reviews for Matinee
GoldDigger chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Erm... the imagery is commendable but you don't seem to be holding the piece together throughout... Or maybe I just didn't get it? Anyhow, I do like the way you handled the imagery! So good work on that!
RuhFuh chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I've been waiting D

Nice idea, on the whole. Though I wasn't quite sure of where it was going in the middle. Keep writing!

x -A