Reviews for Another Love Song |
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![]() ![]() amazing story it was soo cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an awesome story! And that last chapter the song fit PERFECTLY! This was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! I love it! It was sweet! I just loved the moment they spent on top of that roof! Both couple were cute! The story could have been even better if you would have wrote more interactions. The story was in a bit of rush in my oppinion. Nevertheless I enjoyed every bit of your story. Thanks ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is SO effing sweet! I love this story SO much! :D Great job! Awesome story! LOL. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT story! And satisfyingly good ending. I can' believe it's over, but great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought tis story was cute and all but here are a few opinions of mine I wasn't happy with: you ended it to fast, everything went flying by and it was like a race. you should have slowed it down a bit, added more details, more dialog, more thoughts. Also I could never tell who exactly was talking and it was very confusing. and lastly there were a lot of errors and mistakes that made it hard to follow, some gramatical, some spelling, and some with the dialog. you should proof read more closely. But other than that I thought it was cute, so thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... it's really sweet! A lot of it is really familiar though... Anyone would think you've been quoting some Taylor Swift... Lol. Great Story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS COOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was ADORABLE! i loved it. i seriously thought you had ended it there, it made me so mad! but you finished it! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LUV THIS KEEP WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story; wonderful ending. Though I don't know why Devon is apologizing. If you ask me Brookelle should have apologized to him, but hey. You wrote it, not me, and other than that it was nice conclusion. I like your little insert (the end...psych!). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was aboutto get really mad at you. lol. Or just kind of sad. I like the final ending better. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay. She has finally realized her feeling. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jessiepriken: The cursing was part of the song I used so... I felt like it was needed somewhere in the chapter so I put it there. Everyonedeservestheflames: There are parts of the song where she talks about the boy she doesn't like, but then she talks about the one she loves in the chorus so that's way I made two separate parts. oh and my mistake about the "I" part. XD Mistakes happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH. TAYLOR SWIFT. The entire chapter was based off the lyrics. Haha. I'm with my friend right now, and I started singing it, and now we're singing along. Woot woot! EXCEPT I don't understand why you made part of it apply to Kent and part of it apply to Devon. The song is about a guy she doesn't love anymore. And she loves Devon. So...? Yeah. Also, at one point you said "I" and it's not in first person point of view. |