Yay! new Chap! (you update really fast).

Okie tthis sounds god1 i can't wait to see ian fight. His depression is just so hilarious!

Wow. They sure do destroy the town sometimes.

ah yes, learning about Senji's ability is refreshing. I wonder oh when the others will be revealed.

Lol, I glomp Ian (Depression is cool in a sad sorta way :p)

If this actually was a manga series, I'd illustrate it. In this chapter, I'm surprised to see more spelling errors than the last, but the idea for this chapter is pretty interesting. I wonder if there's going to be a grander scheme...?

Good work!

Ah...it's one of those odd service shops :) I like your summary for "Senji Works" - it's very catchy but, as a story, I feel like you need more narration in certain areas. Well, I've only read the first chapter so far, so maybe you've done that already. Anyways, your characters' abilities are quite interesting.

Oh - when Senji said he saw the Death Aura around the kid, I thought the girl he asked out was going to kill him D: That would've been fun.

This chap made me laugh so hard. especially when Senji was like 'can you go out with me?" and they were talking about sei, and Ian's random depression... Wow, my ribs hurt.

I loved this chapter! I still don't understand what it is with Senji and couples... guess that will be revealed later on...

That gilr Aiko is a meanie! Bleh!

Jealousy overcomes all! Haha! Great chapter.

Nice chapter. I always like explanations of like... their weapons and abilities mid-fight. It kind of heightens the excitement!

Looks like Senji Works isn't just all fun and games. Looking forward to the action in the next chapter, fight scenes are my favorite!

Short chapter, but enjoyable. I'm really liking the unique abilites you give your characters, and the strange quirks they have always make me laugh. I'd have to say Kira's ability is probably the most unique one I've heard of so far. Atsuko is my favorite! Every time she licks her lolipop, I just crack up laughing!

omg this chapter totally made me go 'LOL'! hahaha that last bit was hilarious, oh you might want to take not of the typos here and there, like for example, 'Senji and Atsuko bothg grinned'. yeah.

Wait what? He isn't able to leave?

"Free"? Hm... is there going to be an explanation for this in the next chappeh *goes to find out*

Do what? Do WHAT?

hm, i thought she was a little to worried... and kira the guy who always has interestn thngs happening to him has appeared! This must be interestn, ne?