Reviews for Senji Works
ramorphe chapter 68 . 11/16/2011
Amazing story and hooking chapters! i would give your ideas and structure a 9 and your writing style a 7! better than so many others on this site. Keep up the cool work!
darkfireblade25 chapter 62 . 10/11/2011
It sounded like you got all your ideas from TV tropes anyway xD haha interesting chapter so far. But if Senji works keeps him, wouldn't Senji works just be overpowered? xD I feel like if you don't have some complications with this cyborg, then the story would get kinda dull :P just a thought though.
Chika Hanabi chapter 61 . 10/3/2011
Woah! Now, let me review this part by part.

First, Kira's part. That was pretty interesting, how Kira was supposed to be dead for five years. Why those guys would do that, who knows. Reika's Free has something to do with dark masses, but I wonder what that really is. Shadows, perhaps?

Second, Harima's part. This one reminded me a little bit about this show that I used to watch on Cartoon Network, Total Drama Action. Don't ask why I'm referring your story to this, but it just reminded me of it. The main part was towards the end, with the coffin thing. I was scared there'd be another Harima clone! But it's not. Instead, its some sort of human-robot. Interesting twist. I wonder how this will play out.

Sorry for not reviewing lately! I've actually been quite busy. BUT I have been keeping up with the reading. Why would I stop reading this? It's such a great story! But your comment happened to make me feel a little guilty. don't worry 'bout that, though. I'll get over it. And hope you get a new computer soon! (just wondering, but what anime are you referring to?)
FakeFiction chapter 61 . 10/3/2011
Ah, yes, my computer's also not quite prime anymore. It still runs well, but it's a bit slow and can't run the programs I want anymore. Oh well. I always enjoy your work and while I might not be able to review it, I still read it ASAP.

Oxama chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Finally, a nice story for once. It's unique too. Haven't seen one like this in ages.
Yanagi Yamiko chapter 7 . 9/3/2011
new characters on the roll!
Yanagi Yamiko chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
Another interesting cliffhanger! hehe.

Love this.
Yanagi Yamiko chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
Hello!~~ you say the story is similar to Getbackers, but I can see GINTAMA in your anyway, still good and interesting!

Keep up the good work!

~Yanagi Yamiko
Yanagi Yamiko chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I love this story! although it's a bit cliched,(because I can predict the story) this one is a cliched you'll love!

I've only read the first chapter but I got hooked!

More power to you, Tedi-Medoru-san!

~Yanagi Yamiko
Maiya chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Hello there! Maiya here.

Your story really interests me. The storyline and characters are really unique. You might want to do some grammatical editing though. For example, when you're using the plural form you use "eyes" instead of "eye's".

Atsuko, Senji, and Harima are doing great.I'm looking forward to what they're going to do in the next chapter.
Chika Hanabi chapter 58 . 8/11/2011
Yes, this was one bloody chapter o3o sorry i haven't been reviewing lately. i'm so behind on many things ._. BUT DO NOT WORRY. I have been faithfully reading during every update :D *ahem* back to the review.

Bloody chapter. Interesting, but it's pretty...violent. Well, I guess it could balance out from the last chapter with it's happiness. And looking at how these guys are doing their business, looks like this arc is gonna be pretty violent. *prepares mind for bloodiness*

the special chapter amused me very much. TEDI YOU ARE HILARIOUS. It's like one of those random omake things at the end of some manga chapters. And now I'm wondering what that 'James' reference you made was about. Hm. Poor Rei-chan. Now she knows how violent Atsuko and Yuki can be. I like how she's so nonchalant about it all though.

Well, I'm looking forward to more chapters~ Happy writing :3
darkfireblade25 chapter 58 . 8/11/2011
You know, Death Note was made by a writer and drawer team. Just throwing it out there . but good intro chapter. will be looking forward to more of this arc :) still have those grammar blips tho. never fix em eh?
FakeFiction chapter 57 . 8/7/2011
Questions first, then a review for this particular arc of the story.

So, what about Aoi? Hypothetically, SHE got Harima into this group in the first place. Does she care at all? And will this conclusion lead in to a softer arc for the time being?

Fighting is as fighting gets: bloody. I don't know how Harima seems to back away from the whole monsterousity (sic) of the situation sometimes, but when he's involved, it really does seem like it's Harima (running away from) fighting. The addition of Rei proved very helpful as a combative-compliment to Harima's lack of power. While it does amaze me to the extent of showcasing all these frees and other abilities, the whole meat and potatoes to these fights seem to have grown to be strategic and not just flying fists and superpowers. I like that. Grammar burps here and there, just as the whole story goes, but I can overlook that.

Really looking forward to more.
darkfireblade25 chapter 57 . 8/6/2011
Haha I like how Ian goes un-emo when friends are involved xD complete 180 of personality. But good transition chapter :) hope to see further developments.
Chika Hanabi chapter 55 . 8/1/2011
The last segment of the chapter was...hmm I just had the word...uhm...inspiring...? Geh me and my forgetfulness. I'll probably think of the word after I submit this review ;; Anyway, the last segment was interesting. I wonder what happened to Yuu for him to be like that. Pity that he doesn't listen to Senji. Armament Free, huh...You have amazing creativity to be able to find so many types of Frees. Can't wait to see what this one'll do :D
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