Pretty interesting story! I think it would be successful if released in the real world.

before i give you the usual praise, i can't help but notice a few mistakes. hope you don't mind me fixing them :P (if this is the wrong place to put them, then plz forgive me. i'm a n00b ._.)

"But I'll win the fight," Yuu cackled. …... (dots should be in new paragraph)

"Wow, some nobody thinks he beat me?" (insert "can" between "he" and "beat")

Kota got ready to jump at Atsuko. "Really? Then let's see-" (should be date)

other than those, the story goes as well as ever. rly looking to see what yuu's ability is. can't wait wait! x3 grr u and ur cliffhangers.

(whew that was a wait) Finally Senji vs. Yuu begins! And judging from how it is so far, this will be quite interesting.

The part about how Rei was starting to ask Harima about Date dying reminded me of the ending of Kung Fu Panda (if you've ever seen/heard of the movie). It was amusing, actually. Also, the sphere around Date reminds me of a scene from Avatar: The Last Airbender. Huh. Movie references are fun~.

This chapter looks really well edited and proofread. I didn't see anything wrong with it, actually. Good job! And keep up the great story. I look forward to reading more :D

This is the first time I read a story from this site...and I'm amazed!

I'll be sure to subscribe and read more chapters! :D

That was another good chapter. I've enjoyed seeing the past battle chapters. I spotted one possible error in this chapter. You had; "Shin have to lost to you..." where I think you mean to have "Shin may have lost to you...". Otherwise it was well written. We see Atsuko win her fight, and Ameno is also taken down. So there is still Date and Yuu left. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the good writing.

author's note: so this is where u get some of ur ideas. classic manga like that are always an inspiration :) haha i was wondering how u are portraying all these stock personality tropes so wonderfully. xD

"You saw my real body," Atsuko said. She grinned. "Were you stunned by my beauty? I wouldn't blame you. I sure am sexy…"

you sir, are brilliant! lol'ed so hard at that xD

sorry for spamming ur story, i rly love this series xD

i'm beginning to feel that this story has the most trope heavy story i have ever read. good lord knows i love a good shounen action manga :P

author's note: I feel your pain man, I feel ur pain.

At first when I read that Kota was stopping Ameno from getting closer to "the room", I thought Kota was Kira, or someone else from Senji Works coming to help Rei and Harima. Instead, its the actual Kota and not an imposter. Well, if it was an imposter, it'd make this story cliche, and this story is definitely NOT cliche (in most senses).

Harima is one lucky guy, apparently. It looks like Rei-chan's starting to develop a crush on him~. Plus, he's already got Yuki liking him. What I'm amazed about after reading the profile is that Yuki didn't leave to follow Hiroto. Then again, the guy did try attacking everyone...

Hurray for Atsuko-chan beating Natsume! Just wondering, but is Natsume really killed? Its sort of implied but I just want to know...Finally, Senji and Yuu will fight. I wonder how Yuu's going to use his power in this fight.

Keep up the writing and your amazing creativity! Happy summer!

O.O

Cool!

You, sir, have a shit-ton of chapters.

O.O oooo...

I suddenly have a feeling that all four of these battles (now three) will eventually all meet in one place. Then a giant free-for-all will happen. Thus, much blood and gore along with someone probably almost dying. My mind is slowly becoming morbid. Fear for your life xD

So...this chapter. Humm. I like Ameno being thrown out of the room. And I like Rei-chan's comment about that, too. Such a sweet little girl showing so much anger. It's cute. I'm amazed Harima can run so long. And is STILL running. The boy should join cross country. The random scene between Atsuko and Lin was funny. But the resolution, of course, became interesting. AND THUS ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER. grr. You just love having cliff hangers now huh?

Ooh Lin has a new ability! Shadows...sounds very ominous. I was hoping for a snippet of Harima's fight as well, but that's okay. Rotating three-way fights are good enough. I'm suddenly scared of Natsumi because of her last comment. For some reason, I want to have a metabolism like that girl (besides the fact of being forever hungry. Food is good).

Yes another Senji Works profile! I didn't know Atsuko's Free was called Emotional Princess. It explains a lot. I haven't seen mention of her Mental Free since the beginning chapters of this story. It's good to be reminded. Huh. So that's how she gets that super strength. This is why I love these profiles~ Can't wait to see more of them.