Ahh it's funny how Senji is trying to be all leader-ish and stuff. It's quite funny, especially when I imagined his pose xD I like how Atsuko is so nonchalant and blunt with everything though.

A tall tower at a carnival? Strange...I wonder how they got there so fast xD poor Ian, he's just too depressing to be at a carnival xD

Lifetime passes? For free? I wanna go work at that carnival! Panic is fun! Oohh, someone's jealous~~ Wait, she's not mad...meaning not jealous...but she likes Harima...right? o_O;;

"You're working for me, you don't have pride." I cracked up so hard at that. Hilarious, man!

I'm just wondering this, but can't Yuki just 'uncurse' Haruka? I mean, like, make it so that she has the best luck so that she could wake up? Just saying.

You know when Senji was smiling as he got pummeled by Saki's creatures, I just automatically thought "MASOCHIST!" It did seem like it, didn't it? But then again, he was only smiling, he wasn't enjoying it...

Ahh so that's what Leon's ability is...Nice. It'd be cool to manipulate things around you. But I still don't understand how knowing the order of the cards could help him get a royal flush every time...

Ooh Yuki's best friend! Somehow, I'm scared xD I don't know why. And man, Ian's gonna be freaking PISSED when he sees what they did this time xDD Oh god, that's gonna be funny.

Well that was an intense chapter. It was well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. We see Senji getting pummeled by the large drawing, and then when he gets to Saki he finds her guarded by many more creatures. Then Leon is now after Yuki and Harima to kill them, right after Harima brought Yuki back from the brink of insanity and said he reminded her of someone. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the great writing.

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Poor YUKI!

What's gonna happen next?

You know, I'm just wondering here, but does/will Harima have a Free Ability? He might...or not...Just wondering xD.

Ooh, crazy Yuki! She does have a bit of language...wonder who 'he' was...the previous worker? -gasp- bahahaha just kidding! Can't wait to see round two of Leon vs. Yuki and Harima!

This is an interesting story. It was well written, I don't think I encountered spelling or grammar errors. The ability types are interesting, and the way they work is also intriguing. Poor Harima is right in the middle of things too, though Senji did say earlier he can't wait to see his ability. I look forward to reading more, keep up the good writing.

Oh god, Yuki, no! Don't go insane! It's never fun! Although I don't understand how it works completely. So it's like she focuses on that person and they continue to have bad luck? Leon really should wish he never messed with Harima and Yuki!

And Yuki is loaded. Over a hundred million yen...Dang! She got all of those from jobs, I bet. Somehow, I wonder Saki is crazy too. Or is it just the fact that she's a little girl? Why would she even go with Leon in the first place? Ahh the questions. Oh well.

Hmm.. I was a little confused at the beginning, but now I kinda understand it (after reading it over a few times). Another Free Ability, yay! So many Free abilities o.o;;

Wow, this caught my attention, and I'm glad it did! This is a great story, update!

Ahahahahahaha poor Senji xDD These last two were a pretty good chapter. The fight was pretty strange though. So pain is what it feels when your body rots? o_O good to know xD

I only noticed a few mistakes here and there, nothing a little proofreading won't fix.

Uh-oh, the big battle scene is on its way! I really want to see this! Grr, hope you update soon!

Well this was a strange chapter. You know, when all the characters got scared of Yuki, I thought she was a yandere o.o but nope she's kinda a clutz that knows luck :D its a nice ability, to be able to do that.

Waah Ian's so depressing...I like Atsuko, though! Gothic Lolita is one of my favorite lolita styles~ Although Ian's Free Ability is pretty cool, too. Actually, no, scratch that. It's amazingly cool. You could keep living for a while with that ability.

But I'm just wondering right now, what's the difference between mental and physical free ability? This might be a dumb question but I'm just wondering...

And I've read this story thus far, I only see a few mistakes here and there, nothing a little proofreading wouldn't fix. The storyline so far is pretty good. I'm getting hooked! At first the summary didn't seem that interesting, and I was just thinking this would be a bunch of one-shots, but no! This is turning out to be very interesting. Now, I must continue reading! xD

Ahh! Love the fight scene this chapter! You gotta update soon! It's been over two months! But take your time, of course!