Reviews for Breaking Promises |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Welp I'm still here :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so addicted I never want this story to end |
![]() ![]() ![]() We need to find a way to make sure these don't get plagarised like copyright them somehow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Guh. I still love this story as much as I did before :) perfection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey just letting you know that I can't wait until your writers block disappears. I dame across your story and I could not put my iPod down until I finished it. So please let me know when you have succeded in bypassing that writers block. Avid reader - Freak- |
![]() ![]() ![]() sadface! good luck with it though |
![]() ![]() yeah serena does kinda seem a little...promiscuous... but i luv her! |
![]() ![]() Please please please please update this. I really want to read moreeee. update please :D |
![]() ![]() Gunnerkrigg Court is awesome. It's a web comic. You should check it out sometimes. BTW, this is awesome. P |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! You are such a good writer! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sorry that this review is coming so late after the update! I had to reread the whole thing because I'd forgotten a lot of important details, and it's finals week .. I love that Serena and Troy's relationship is so much more relaxed now, with lots of banter. However, I can't help but notice that there's a lot more profanity than there used to be .. symptom of growing up? Hmm .. either way it works with Serena's earliest characterization as cocky b****. Oh, so Trystan acts? I never knew this before ... I can see your devious mind working out a way to get Trys and Dee into UTSPA. :) I'm still raher curious as to what will happen with Justin White.. There's still so much to learn about both Justin and his father. I can't wait for the next update! And by the way, I like the screen name change. :) ~dail-of-the-air |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! keep going please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so I am extremely addicted to this book! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh :) sorry for freaking out there haha it's just that this book is so good i can't explain it in words :O! I can't wait for you to write more. This is definitely the best story on fictionpress I have read so far. Did I tell you I love your book! I hope your leg feels better! |