Reviews for Vancouver 2010
Punslinger chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Your brother seems to be a pretty smart guy. Will he teach me how to make a hundred a click?
Pathway chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Your writings lack boredom. Thank you. I appreciate unique, meaningful and descriptive.
Saurosuchus chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Oh boy, the joy of gathering as a family for sports events. I feel you in this piece-at least to some extent. My family is completely couch potato, ignore the rest of the world and worship the screen when it is football season. They don't seem to keen on the Olympics. All I watched this year was the ski races or something like that.

Well, nice piece. I think it is good that you can concoct a poem like this, very real in a sense.
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
ja; hard

to connect

to this kinda

werld. . . .

oh well.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
"My Brahma soul." A beautiful description, Louis.

"Skijumping." That's one of the only events I've watched lately.

"I stand before them." God. If this is true, Baron, I'm sorry that your family ignored you like that. And if the scholorship is true, then I offer my congratulations!

"50-inch new God." 'Deus ex machina' for your family, it seems.