Reviews for Dear God,
Lks chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I like the format of this story, and it's quite sweet, but in my opinion the ending is a bit far-fetched.
(Spoiler alert)
If they kiss under the mistletoe at Christmas, why would he start ignoring her? And then, when she asks if they're friends and he says no, but he totally has time to expand on that, AND she walked (not ran) away so he had still more time to expand on it. And whyever would he feel he needs to make her jealous?
It's just hthat he literally had her at Christmas and then started making things hard for no reason
daisukiklove chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
twibbit chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Aww so cute
CityBlackOut chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
cute as blueberry pie, and i LOVE blueberry pie x3
TeddyBearHugs chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
This is one of the best stories on this site :D I absolutely love it!
lalaboom chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
So cute and sweet! It was a cliche but the way Maddie talked to God made it unique. Nicely done! :)
siluetamorfa chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I really, really like it. It was beautiful even though I think Willy took his time to confess but hey, they're teenagers and a teenage guy in top of that. Love it!
SecretAgent99 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Aw, I thought this was a really sweet oneshot. I liked how it was set in the format of the characters writing letters to God. Haha, that reminds me of the Letters to God movie. :D
the cup of tea chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
really really nice :)
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
It's hilarious. I love it.:)
critic chapter 1 . 8/13/2010

your story was cute! but...will kind of bothered me in the end. you should have explained WHY he was ignoring her for so long. and that's super immature of him to make her jealous after he's been ignoring her.
WishBlade chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Whoa, that was so freakin' adorable!
Ngoc1231 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I do like how you wrote it. It was very different and cute!

Love the story!

mesweetescape chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
aw that was so cute. Pulled at my heartstrings! or whatever that was o.o

Loved it x
anitsirK chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I love it! Though, were the grammar errors in the first few entries intentional? :) AND, I love Willy. Though his name is pretty dorky. HAHAHHAAHHA! I like its lightheartedness. :)
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