|Reviews for criticsm|
| JuniperRhose chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
To me, this poem seemed to represent a kind of rebuilding, an unwillingness not to survive. And I like that. :)
| vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I really, really like this.
The sort-of rhyme scheme fit, because it felt a little unbalanced, but made it a little more than random.
You picked beautiful words like narcissism, but kept it easy and relatable, which was nice.
The bolds and italics definitely added to it as well.
Now that I've gotten the technical stuff out of the way..
I love the way this poem makes me feel-a little melancholy, a little reminiscent, and a little defiant. It reads shorter than it is, kind of how love feels shorter than it was. It's...I don't know. But it makes me feel very strongly, and I really like that. :)