Reviews for Flashpoint
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This was really powerful. I especially liked the lines:

"Done with the nights that last four years"

and

"'Cause I'd rather die terrified than live forever".

They meant a lot to me personally, and really made me identify with this poem.
t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I really, really loved this. Its so crystal clear. I especially loved the last few lines. Fantastic work.