|Reviews for Mightier than the Sword|
| the invisible princess chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Your a good writer. And the way you portray Isabella is very realistic I like the way she makes up her own storys. However I thought I should point out that the times tables you were useing for Celeste are probaly easier than most 12 year old would learn
| Nicki BluIs chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Are you gonna continue this? Because it seems good so far.I do think the dialogue could be a little stronger The individual lines are fine but (and this maybe becasue of the lack of narration) they could use more force and emotion. Same goes for the interaction between characters. The exchange between Ted and his daughters especially needs more attention. Ted nad Marvin was pretty solid though. I thought that whole exchange was the best - really emotional and engaging.
im curious about the direction this will take. I have sneaking suspicion that Isabella will have some sort of imagination related super power? Whatever the case be sure to keep it fresh and original.
Can't wait to read more!