Reviews for Minty Root Beer
pixiemidnight chapter 21 . 3/30/2013
I read this before but never left a review! I might've left an anonymous one back when I used to lurk around fictionpress silently and without a username. It was a fun reread. I'm a bigger fan of Jake than Jazz and that ending was sooo...yum. Lol.
kiwisnake chapter 21 . 2/26/2013
Still a great story. Though the episode with Jake and Lizzie never ceases to infuriate me haha. And his excuse was a very poor one; typical jealous male though. Thanks for letting me know of the update :) Props.
Tim Crossleigh chapter 22 . 12/23/2012
May whoever plagiarizes your work be chewed on by a thousand toothless, flaming camels and their hair plucked one at a time by rabid howler monkeys...
Cassie chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
I think this is interesting BUT on a serious note,

drunk sex is rape. A person who is incapacitated/drunk is unable to give consent. By law, this sex scene is rape. I think it's important for writers to be aware of these certain things because drunk sex is considered to be a social norm, and woman who engage in drunk sex feel like they don't have a write to charge the men/women they have sex with.
Bailey1.5 chapter 22 . 12/5/2012
Tim Crossleigh chapter 21 . 12/7/2011
I agree, it is truly sad, but as you say, 'all good things must come to an end'.

Perhaps, if anything, I'm far too guilty of over-empathising with Jazz and Jake. But the way you write draws a reader in like a maelstrom, with just as much chance of escape.

Never before have two words twisted a dull blade inside my chest, until today when I read those two words; 'The end.'

However, with the healing closure offered by the Epilogue, I personally think that the story ended exactly where it was meant to in the final chapter.

The soft, beautiful feeling of someone you truly love gently tending to a wound isn't half as sweet without the stark comparison to the burn.

You drew me in, you took me on a wild ride and made a complete sucker out of me... Thankyou!
Tim Crossleigh chapter 9 . 12/7/2011
I love reading this story and struggle to force myself to put it down when I have to.

But, my God, is it frustrating? Just when you think the sexual tension and pheromone levels couldn't possibly be any thicker in the air... You find a way to up the ante.

I feel for this story like Jazz for Jake. I loathe the teasing, the longing, the lust and the disappointment and pain, yet pine for the next chapter like a junkie longs for his grey nurse.

Just so you know; I think you're evil, and I love your work.
Belle Pippkins chapter 21 . 12/2/2011
I have honestly never reviewed a story before, and I know that this has been completed for a while, but oh my gosh. This was such a good story! You are so talented and I just had to tell you! I have recommended this story to my friends!

Happy writing!
urtenshii chapter 21 . 12/1/2011
:) Great job on this. It is definitely a very nice story. I like the way you related the atoms and molecules into controlling the four elements.

That was definitely a unique idea.

There were a few lines that were missing some words and some that was grammatically incorrect. Nothing major, though. And if you would go back and read it all over again, you would most certainly spot them.

With just a little editing and a few more vivid descriptions of the characters and the setting, this would turn out to be a really great story.

Not that it's not great already.

A suggestion: Why don't you put up a sequel? Something about Lizzie, Skye and maybe Andrew? How they found love and all? I'd certainly like to see the backstory behind Lizzie's being a whore or Skye's eerily calm demeanor or how Andrew had fit in into the group.

:) I know it's long been overdue but congratulations on this.

Definitely a favorite! :)

Keep on writing!
Garneau chapter 21 . 9/8/2011

It's all come to an end. It was quite a tumultuous ride for Jazz and Jake. I am so glad that they ended up together!

Their so cute.

Thanks for sharing your writing, I really loved reading your updates.

I'm really enjoying No Time Like The Present, and really look forward to seeing what you post next,

choco-rose chapter 21 . 9/5/2011
smileing through the whole thing YAYYYY THEY GOT TOGETHER! xD xD xD xD
BeetrootIsPink chapter 21 . 9/5/2011
It's weird how I cried at the end of chapter 20. It was sad because I thought they wouldnt get togeter and I thought that it was the end of the story. Then I realised there was one more and I'm like 'HELL YEAHHH!'

So in conclusion this story was so fun to read and I loved it!
Jiayee chapter 21 . 9/2/2011
I CANT BELIEVE YOU ONLY HAVE 94 reviews! you deserve 9004 reviews for this awesome story! it's the best story i've ever read(: i 3 it! Jake and Jazz are just... wonderful!
violet-eyez chapter 21 . 9/1/2011
aww sad to see it finished
Bailey1.5 chapter 21 . 9/1/2011
Do we get a sequel with a kid? Maybe? Haha this story is amazing! ) 3 as well as your NTLTP
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