Reviews for 38 Minutes
xenolith chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Holy shit! I don't know why I haven't read this sooner.

At first I thought the guy could have probably been Bo, but Todd is a something different altogether. I don't really feel sorry for him, and he doesn't come off as pathetic because he really did try. He totally had hope, and then as the scene progresses, it is demolished.

The layout worked great. I didn't understand what was happening at the start, but by the end I had a few clues. I think the subject matter may border on too much for fictionpress, but it's an integral part of the piece, and handled tastefully. Sorta.

I mean, this: 'The fire that scared him kept his progeny from escaping.' Had me laughing out loud.

All in all I thought this was well written, emotional, fresh and most importantly, different. I'd love to see some more work from you!
foreverlasting24 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Interesting first chapter. I couldn't help but laugh at Todd's oops. I also like the title reference. :)