Reviews for Sonnet Remembrance
Isca chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
"Until we align." This was the most powerful line from the poem for me. I love the idea that lovers, like the stars perhaps, need to "align" properly for their love/light to be properly expressed.
Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
A well written sonnet. Beautiful and great imagery as well. The love in this felt realistic and tasteful, and not smutty at all.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
What I really liked about this was the fact that it managed to encapsulate that rushed ethereal feeling passion can bring about. As always fantastic use of words but I think what really stood out for me was the fact that it seemed so intimate without being pornographic.
the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I like this one. It's intense without being explicit; personal and yet... there is something so much bigger to it. I am at a loss for the word right now. "vertebrae, knee caps, eye sockets, until we align" ...I don't know. It's a little surreal and mythical.