Reviews for The Essence of Not Falling in Love |
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![]() ![]() I read the chapter, then the first 3 sentences of the authors notes and I know where charlies personality from sometimes...awesome. Lol, love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a sweet story! Like it! Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore this story. I really do. I wish I could meet you in person and hug you. Thank you for giving us such an amazing story! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() They got together way too quickly! We didn't really see the development of the relationship and the lessons were lesser than what I expected. Still, it was an enjoyable read. Thanks and keep writing! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lovethis |
![]() ![]() Okkk! i just finished reading this and i have to say i thought it was amazinggg! i just wish i didnt end already. i also think the whole charlie and penn couple happened to quick. but altogether it kept me wanting to read more and more. i honestly think you should make a sequel cause this can go sooo far and trust me people will read it. one think i also like about it is charlies attitude. she kind of reming me of me haha. she dont give a fuck about anything anyone says aboutn her and thats me all the way. shes not to strung up on dating and relationships also like me. she doesnt mind being herself and i mostly love how she doesnt hate being single cause to being single is being free cause its all you and nobody else. anyways im sorry if i taking up to much off yourr time. just thought that i could tell you what i thought. i just loveeeee ittt like omgggg. i almostt forgot but i LOVEEEEEE THE SARCASM! im alllll about sarcasm so that fits in alot. its also really funny and humorous. anyways thanks and GREATJOB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Finally finished it! The ending wasn't bad at all, I liked it. It was a simple yet effective way to end it. I mean, they ARE Penn and Charlie. Wouldn't do without some bickering now, would it? Anyway, great job, as I've said before! Totally worth revisiting in the future :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is a great story! I like your great range of vocabulary, hahaha. And that it's not over-detailed or underdone. I was gonna wait until the end of the story to review, but then I had a question for this chapter...Didn't Maya get asked by some dude named Derek? How come she ended up going with some guy named Josh? Just something I happened to notice. So yeah, great job! Now I'm going to go finish this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that chapter title is totally ridiculous and misleading! not cool, buddy. LOVE THIS STORY. sad that it's over. please make a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice semi-cliff hanger. well, not really for me because i'm reading this story when it's completed! YES. awesome stuff so far. LUV IT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wyatt asshole. i'm totally in love with penn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() rough characterization but i appreciate the attempt. love this story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA! KISSING! ahhhh that was intense...and slightly uncomfortable. i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() promising start! can't wait to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one helluva story! I love how the ending isn't Disneyfied. Penn and Charlie are still flawed characters, but they're happy together, and so everything works out perfectly. |