Reviews for Love is a Piece of Cake |
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![]() ![]() Best line in the story: "I know I don't look like much, but I'll find a way to crush you if you let him down." Loved it ;) |
![]() ![]() yes...*sighs deliriously* I need an Andrew Walsh in my life. I will also be writing my name on every desk I sit on from now on. (What? I live in hope.) xoxo, slay |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is way cute; I couldn't keep the smile off my face! Brilliant writing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute! Although, I have to wonder - what magical school is this where other students wouldn't write on the desk too and interfere in their "courtship ritual"? You know something rude and vulgar, but funny too. Just thinking... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. I'm not surprised at all that it won February's Flash Me Suddenly fic. It was extremely creative and I loved their relationship throughout the whole story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "effing janitors. I should sue for interference with attempted courtship rituals." The best line. Why doesn't males like Andrew Walsh exist? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what to type...it's adorably cute and I love it. :) great one-shot here. _ Imika |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! so cute [: i loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. I'm happy to have lost to you in the flash challenge. though a few have mentioned your lead not having a first name, I like it that way (whether or not you did it on purpose). The whole desk romance I have definitely read before but I still find it cute and not over done. overall, great job m'dear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... ADORABLE! Definitely gets me back into that Valentine's, lovey-dovey, fluffy mood. It was light and fluffy and funny and just so CUTE. Which is an adjective I use way too much but I just can't help it. One thing- we know her last name is Motts, but we never know her first name... kind of missing that piece to the puzzle. But I think the Henry thing was cute. In summation: Aw. Loved it. Hope to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahahahaha I love the ending:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, I really like it! Well done! IT was sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! that was so adorable! i loved it! i was smiling the entire time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. This is an endearing one shot with a healthy dose of originality to make readers smile. :) -Mags |