Reviews for Memories
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Wow, the narrator sorta reminds me of General Zaroff in 'The Most Dangerous Game' (-_- we had to take the story in English last term). The guy is a nut-case coockoo

I thought it was good but could've been better if you described what happened that first time. Not exactly gore-ish, but just creepy and insane is how I'd love to read it

Typos:

*I forgot that there would be conciquences (consequences)

*After tht (you forgot the 'a' :P the same happens to me when I type too fast) it was simpler