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![]() ![]() it's a little repetitive and cliched. the "unfriendly / and unfriendable" is rather clever. the repetition of 'escape' is a bit too heavy. the one word lines are good, putting emphasis on those terms. title? |
![]() ![]() ![]() yet another very moving poem,your words bleed perfectly.. all your poems seem to touch me, and the different angle's you look through in your work...keep em coming...pretty please with a cherry on the top...im not that mad,just mad over your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel the exact same way. I liked the format of the poem; the lowercase letters work so much better with the mood than capitalizing would. Great poem. "Life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly." |