it's a little repetitive and cliched. the "unfriendly / and unfriendable" is rather clever. the repetition of 'escape' is a bit too heavy.

the one word lines are good, putting emphasis on those terms.

title?

yet another very moving poem,your words bleed perfectly.. all your poems seem to touch me, and the different angle's you look through in your work...keep em coming...pretty please with a cherry on the top...im not that mad,just mad over your work

I feel the exact same way. I liked the format of the poem; the lowercase letters work so much better with the mood than capitalizing would. Great poem.

"Life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly."