Reviews for life
Jake chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
it's a little repetitive and cliched. the "unfriendly / and unfriendable" is rather clever. the repetition of 'escape' is a bit too heavy.

the one word lines are good, putting emphasis on those terms.

title?
mr mahler chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
yet another very moving poem,your words bleed perfectly.. all your poems seem to touch me, and the different angle's you look through in your work...keep em coming...pretty please with a cherry on the top...im not that mad,just mad over your work
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I feel the exact same way. I liked the format of the poem; the lowercase letters work so much better with the mood than capitalizing would. Great poem.

"Life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly."