|Reviews for The Debutante|
| Princess Wanderer chapter 34 . 12/31/2014
you left way too many things unanswered. It's one thing to rush a piece but the ending is a smack in the face
| TheMadDancer chapter 34 . 12/7/2014
Your story was amazing. Very well written :)
| my princess ending chapter 34 . 10/1/2014
I found this story completely adorable. I've always loved historical love stories because it's placed back in a time where everything is so proper and marriage arrangements are made to spice things up. And there's just this different atmosphere with the classes, balls, gowns, etc. And your story makes me realize how much I actually love these stories.
There are times where I loathe Priscilla because of her attitude but there are times where I praise her because she's so stubborn. I know she's capable of caring and that's what makes me like her. She's able to change and I love that she cares for her father so deeply.
I agree that the ending is rushed but I also feel that the whole story is a bit rushed. But because the rest of the story is rushed, the ending seems to fit in with it. I don't see the process of Ethan falling in love with Priscilla but I can see the qualities he likes. But overall, they make me happy.
| my princess ending chapter 33 . 10/1/2014
I cannot comprehend what could make Ethan tell Priscilla he doesn't love her anymore. It doesn't make sense to me and I want to rip my hair out of my head. Why would he hurt her like that? It's not like he DOES have someone else right?
| my princess ending chapter 30 . 10/1/2014
I was 500% sure the remaining chapters would be about Priscilla and Ethan fixing a quarrel but you wouldn't believe how relieved I was when Mr. Thumble smacked her head. That's wrong to say but I don't feel bad because I can't wait until they reunite—if they do, which they have to!
| my princess ending chapter 29 . 10/1/2014
I'm guessing Olive schemed this. Or maybe Sebastian but it's unlikely because he was just at the ball and I doubt he'd hire people the chase her down and knock her out. And my last guess is someone that's a rival of Ethan's but we haven't heard of any so it's probably not. I don't even know why I thought Olive but she's horrible and capable of something like this.
| my princess ending chapter 28 . 10/1/2014
Now that Priscilla is in love with Ethan we can be happy and dance in circles or something! But there has to be another problem besides the problem with Priscilla's father since there's still 7 chapters left. And what about Olive?
| my princess ending chapter 21 . 9/30/2014
I'm so happy that there's some action going on between Priscilla and Ethan. I thought they'd never spend time together again. I can't tell if what Ethan is saying is that he likes her or if he's interested in her or if he is just lusting for her. But I love the way he gets jealous of Mr. Thumble and tells Priscilla she will be his marchionness soon. I just melted.
| my princess ending chapter 18 . 9/30/2014
Every part of me feels torn into a million pieces. Yes, everything Ethan said to Priscilla is true but the things Priscilla said about Ethan were also true. I'm so hurt that they can hurt each other like this even though they don't love each other because this will come back and haunt the other—if you write it like that. I know it would forever tear me apart if someone said that to me, even if they tried to make up for it. I can just hear Priscilla starting to scheme of ways to avoid marrying Ethan, for example, taking in Sebastian's offer. This is breaking my heart.
| my princess ending chapter 15 . 9/30/2014
I see, so Ethan does find Priscilla pretty. It's weird to think that she's actually good looking because being in Priscilla's mind makes me think she's nothing special. Although it's nice to know Ethan is interested in marrying her.
| my princess ending chapter 14 . 9/30/2014
From the way Sebastian is so persistent I feel as if he actually habors some kind of feeling towards Priscilla. But then again they're cousins so it's unlikely if not possible. I just hope they don't end up married. And I pray that Mr. Thumble will learn to give up because I don't support them.
| my princess ending chapter 9 . 9/30/2014
Stories like these name me wish I lived in that time. Priscilla is such a headstrong and stubborn girl I'm not sure if I like her. I hope whoever saves her treats her well! And I pray somebody shows interest in Priscilla soon because I would cry if she marries Sebastian.
| my princess ending chapter 3 . 9/29/2014
I can't help but wish that Olive could've attended Priscilla's ball but I'm also glad she won't be there because Ethan will be! I wonder if they're gonna start off with a hateful relationship between the two.
| leavesfallingup chapter 17 . 4/21/2013
Actually, from all that I have read on the subject, Ethan's appraisal of Almack's isn't far from accurate. They seem to have made a point of making their cuisine almost threadbare. Sometimes I wonder if wealth and inbreeding didn't scramble a few too many braincells in the English court.
| leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I wonder how many such incidents truly did happen. Surely a few young ladies were so terrified that they threw up, or fainted, or froze. The poor girl.