Reviews for The Serpent's Pawn
frugale chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Wow. Did you really actually write this? Because it's amazing! I wouldn't expect to stumble upon such writings on an mere amateur website. You must be a published author, that's for sure. I really enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm, it all fell in place perfectly. I'm totally WOWed!
Bddssgsydhdndk chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Wooh. You are not only good at writing stories but also at writing poems. This poem had very vivid imagery. It was very well written. Wow. Great job. Especially on the rhyming. It didn't sound like you just out a world there to make the end of the lines rhyme. They actually fit and sounded like they belonged there. I throughly enjoyed it. Really awesome job at poetry! Keep up the good work! Wow!