Reviews for The Serpent's Pawn
empiresofwater chapter 1 . 3/18
I really liked this! It had a really nice rhythm to it and I liked your hints at the characters - although it was short, I really got a good impression of them. And it had an interesting atmosphere too - a romance feel but also more of mysterious mood too, which was great!
frugale chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Wow. Did you really actually write this? Because it's amazing! I wouldn't expect to stumble upon such writings on an mere amateur website. You must be a published author, that's for sure. I really enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm, it all fell in place perfectly. I'm totally WOWed!
Bddssgsydhdndk chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Wooh. You are not only good at writing stories but also at writing poems. This poem had very vivid imagery. It was very well written. Wow. Great job. Especially on the rhyming. It didn't sound like you just out a world there to make the end of the lines rhyme. They actually fit and sounded like they belonged there. I throughly enjoyed it. Really awesome job at poetry! Keep up the good work! Wow!