|Reviews for Beauty Within|
| skyward squidly squee chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Ah. I love the "Who brought the day / from darkest night?" at the beginning. The first thing I imagined was creation, and with the next few lines I thought of dawn. It was pretty powerful, and I loved it. I also adore the fourth stanza; that feels like where I've been.
- giant squid.
| sealednectar chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
A wonderful poem. Beautiful.
'If only we
could see anew
the beauty which is hidden'. -If only...
Keep it up.
| Nero Wolfe chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I really like this. I especially like "Then, perhaps, we'd see a light and walk in joy forever."