Reviews for Violet Eyes I'll Miss You, Veronique
Isca chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
The words "greasy" and "grimy" in the opening of the poem are very onomatopoeic and definitely set the tone.

"Potbellied drunkards." Excellent writing here. The tone is sophisticated & contrasts the grungy setting nicely.

"She has violet eyes." I love this line (as well as "amethyst irises" later on). This is a wonderful description.

"No one would claim her marred hourglass figure amongst the other corpses." May I just say: WOW. This is my favourite line from the poem; the tone is phenomenal.

Keep writing. You're talented. :)